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Saturday, February 12, 2011

New Story writing for a competition

Currently, i stop writing the story"1000 Paper Planes To A Friend".Now , Kenji and Alexto are like fighting over who gets to protect Rino and Hana . Rino also found out that Alexto has Wunopontin(a chemical needed for the revival method).I talk about this at the next post.

The new story , the title is called The Assistant Monitor's Smile. I write in it Chinese ,so the title should be
副班长的笑容(fu ban zhang de xiao rong).

It's a story about a girl call Bi Mei, is a best friend with the assistant monitor, Hong Ming .Hong Ming loves to smile , that's why he has many friends . However ,Bi Mei is not friendly and her only friend is Hong Ming.The two of them always go everywhere together .Until one day , Hong Ming suddenly fainted when he was practising for the basketball competition .Bi Mei saw it , he ran to Hong Ming . She  saw Hong Ming , was so weak and has breathing  problem . The head prefect saw it and call the  teacher ,The teacher quickly send Hong Ming to the hospital and call Hong Ming's parents. The doctor check  on Hong Ming , he had a very very serious heart attack , the doctor said it cant be safe . Before Hong Ming dies , he call Bi Mei to see him . Bi Mei walk to him . He told Bi Mei"You are my most important best friend ."Bi  Mei cries .Hong Ming touch Bi Mei's face . Hong Ming face was pale and his hand was cold , he smiled , but this was his final smile .He told Bi Mei to take his necklace . It was a cross necklace . He help Bi Mei to wear the necklace. He slowly closed his eyes ,He then died . Bi Mei cried and say :"You are my best friend too. I want to see your smile , forever."

After a year , Bi Mei still remember that incident , she decided to step forward and make new friends . She also will not forget about Hong Ming .

I plan to write about 4000 words .It's for a competition.